For literacy this week our topic was Strange and Wonderful animals. One of the tasks that i had done was fill in an Attribute Organiser that tells you information about interesting animals. One animal I learned about was the Goblin shark, what I learned about it was that they live up to 30-35 years. What I did well was I focused on typing all the information myself instead of copying and pasting. Next time I would add more detail about some other animals. Please feel free to add some information about what I could do better.
Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview Pārua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, May 14, 2021
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Kia ora Mya Jas here -I like how you have described what we had to do for literacy this week and expand what we did.next time I think that you could be a bit more specific and add more detail and punctuation. I also like how you added pitchers of your work that you did. So good job keep up the great work! =)
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